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After watching the first draft of my music video I picked up on some mistakes and things which I know that I can improve on.
- It doesn't fade well between the footage of New York and the introduction of the artist [0.11]
- A short part of blackness between the park bench and the bed scene [0.20 - 0.30]
- Bad lighting for the scene in the bed [0.21 - 0.30]
- The scenes in the bed also look out of sync (due to the short blackness between scenes) [0.21 - 0.30]
- A random zoom-in (personally I prefer the close-up in order to show the facial expression of the artist) [0.30 approx]
- Blackness [0.43 - 0.50]
- Lifts up her hand at the end of the scene to move her hair (bad editing) [1.05]
- Blackness [1.06 - 1.10]
- Shaky camerawork at the end of the footage of New York [1.11 - 1.15]
- Blackness [1.16 - 1.20]
- Blackness [1.34 - 1.42]
- Needs a fade between the crashing waves and the artist [1.43]
- Blackness [1.59 - 2.01]
- Blackness [2.09 - 2.12]
- Blackness [2.40 - 2.44]
- Extremely shaky camera work of New York [2.44 - 2.50]
- The same scene is too long and there needs to be various shots in that space of time [3.12 - 3.38]
- Blackness [3.39]
- New York footage goes on for too long - and some of it isn't very clear [3.40 - 4.06]
- Blackness [4.06 - 4.14]
- Shaky footage [4.14 - 4.19]
- New York footage goes on for too long [4.20 - 4.52]
- Fade at the end [4.52]
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